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Thursday 29 January 2015

Surprise Haiku

  Today the Haiku is based on a short story.which relates a scene of a beautiful river side and all of a sudden  a  bright eyed deer appears as a surprise. I have given another surprising twist to the story.
Read on;                                      

                                           Riverside bright eyed
                                       deer seen.Where they hide
                                             next morning ?




Written for Carpe Diem Prompt   # 4 'Surprise'.












                                                 
                                                  

7 comments:

  1. That's an intelligently woven twist that makes the Haiku extra special:)

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    1. I was thrilled at your comments ' that the Haiku is extra special.

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    1. Thank you Amrit for the encouraging comments.

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  3. Great post..Love d mystery
    Happy Weekend !

    www.ananyatales.com

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    1. Thank you Ananya.for the encouraging comments.

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  4. Ah, well though they can be like "deer in the headlights" (pardon the pun), they can also scamper away pretty quickly too! You have captured that well with your haiku Usha. :) <3

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